Quite good!
The first 2 minutes of this song really has a strong floyd vibe that I was really digging, the pace picks up quite a bit after that and, oddly enough, reminds me of some of Katatonias stuff. The vocals were alright, not great, not horrible, just OK.
I can't help but feel they may benefit from better compression and maybe different use of reverb to make it feel like your voice is more in the room with the other instruments.
Anyways, not bad!
Regards,
Daniel